Sunday, April 21, 2013

Process of Revision/ Frustration



Starting my essay on my, White Noise,  essay, I find myself constantly changing words
 or the structure of my sentence, or even the paragraph. It seems like it is a constant revision. 
I always look for improvements. I met with a Mr. Alan Clement, who helped revise my essay. 
He seemed to always on the urge to better the paper by proper terms. It added flavor.
 I couldn't help but feel that my paper could use more improvement. But, at last I felt
 my paper was where it should be. Revision is something that should be done constantly,
 this can only help the paper on its clarity. For me, it was a struggle, a new
challenge, and over all exhausting. I hope I did well enough to achieve my goal. 
Such anxiety and frustration!


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1 comment:

  1. I totally feel you. I myself was super frustrated and wanted to give up but i sucked it up and did it. Revision is certainly the best route when it comes to essays like this one. In the bright side we are done with it (=

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